Once a little girl called Alice went out with her sister on a picnic. Oh my sister is reading a boring book he was a rabbit came jumping and he looked he was in a hurry. So I followed him and it came down the drainpipe led to a magical land of crazy thing animals and then I went to a caterpillar and he took me to a palace and the queen of hart a cat appeared. Out of nowhere so I fooled him to a rose bush and he disappeared again and he went to a party wow this is amazing party it was fantastic.
By Imogen
Hi Imogen,
I loved the way that you have used the story of Alice in Wonderland as a basis for your story. I can see why the prompt made you think of this. Next time, don’t forget to try to use other connectives, not just “and.”
Keep up the good work!
Yanalie (Team 100)