Princess and the Naughty Prince Rat #100wc

One day a princess was packing her bag and came behind her was the rat pirate. He put his hand on the princess’ mouth. He had a lime jacket. The clock was ticking. The rat put her on his ship. A prince came and he untied the princess and went overboard and they excitedly cheered that they would never see him again.


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  1. Hi Kathryn,
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    I was delighted that the princess was freed. I love a happy ending!
    Good work this week. Well done!
    Mrs Boyce

  2. A rat pirate? Goodness me, that sounds very unpleasant Kathryn; I wonder what he might look like in his lime jacket? You’ve quite a few words to spare from the 100 word limit, so you could describe some of the things in your story – the characters, the scene. This really helps your reader picture the story in their mind.
    Well done on including the five words. Keep rising to the Challenge.

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