“Why? What? How did we turn into rocks?” said Big Rock.
“We eat the food in that restaurant,” said Medium Rock.
“And the food makes people turn into rock and the waiters are poisoning everyone,” said Small Rock.
“I cannot move…HELP HELP HELP!!”
POP POP
“Sorry,” said Big Rock.
“What did you have for your lunch?” said Medium Rock.
(14 days later)
“Can you turn us back into normal people and not pigs?” said Small Rock.
“OK, I will be careful this time.”
By Margot
Margot,
I like your use of conversation to help your characters tell the story.
Keep writing!
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA