New Land 100wc

One day I was playing in the garden and saw a rabbit so I followed it. It led me down the drainpipe and it came down the drainpipe as well. When we got down the drainpipe IT WAS SO EXCITING. It was filled with carrots that never end and water with a gummy boat. The flowers could talk, it was amazing! Not a lot of people lived there.

“Hello,” I said, “but I know you can’t talk.”

“Yes I can,” said the rabbit.

I was surprised!

“Bye,” I said. Off I go.

By Phoebe

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  1. I wonder if you will follow the bunny Phoebe! Thank you for being brave enough to share your hippity-hoppity great writing with the world. *Applause*

  2. Phoebe! I love that the drainpipe was a portal to a magical world, where a rabbit has never-ending carrots. I would love to sail in a gummy-boat but wonder if it might get a bit sticky on a hot sunny day!
    Great punctuation of speech too.
    I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing for this week’s 100WC.

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