One butiful sunny day a little girl was walking in the park then she herd a noise in the trees.And then there was a BANG full of colers
it looked like there was some sort of unicorn in there.Then the little girl called out HELLO is enyone there then she herd a SQWEEK .
Dount be fritend I dount bite said the little girl.
So then the thing in the tree poked her head out and then the little girl SHREEKED with exssitement .
It,s a UNICORN but how did she get up there so she ran up to the unicorn happily.
A magical moment when the girl met the unicorn! Super imagination Margot.
Mr Banton
I love that there is a unicorn in your story. Great imagination! I wonder if you can have an older student in a different grade partner up with you to check your spelling and punctuation before submitting each week?
Mrs. Darden
Grandview Preparatory
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