My first story

The other day I wrote my first story and I wanted it to go on the blogsite ((Mummy and Daddy only helped with some of the spelling and punctuation!):

‘The hen was in his pen and the star was in the sky, and the sheep and a dinosaur were playing tag and the sheep won.  Then the clouds came in, the sheep was sad.  The dinosaur had an idea when he saw a house and there was a rainbow.  There was a monster, a coconut fell on his head.  Then it was bedtime, they all went to bed.  In the morning they played tag in the living room.  They sat on the chair and watched Star Wars.  Now everyone was happy.  The end.’

By Matthew Harris

Posted in Rabbits.

2 Comments

  1. We read your story in class today Matthew. All of the class thought it was brilliant. Thank you mum and dad for helping Matthew.
    Rabbits Class

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